HearsePileup's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario TimeLapse]

My review;

Since you kindly asked for a review, I shall provide you with my feedback;

Firstly, you are quite obviously a talented draftsman/woman, and your shading is really very good. It was also interesting to see the process of the image's construction. Indeed, I felt graphically this animation was really quite impressive.

However having said that, I also feel that this animation is nothing more than a demonstration of skill - I don't really feel that it pushes any boundaries, and this is especially apparent in the use of popular computer game characters in poses that have been previously realised. It would be really interesting to see some original illustrations, or if you feel the need to continue illustrating game characters, perhaps drawing them in original settings. It just feels like these animations you're making are lacking a little something (obviously only to my personal taste, feel free to ignore me!)

I hope this has been some sort of use to you

TDM

liable-to-explode responds:

Wow! Thank you very much. I will take this into consideration!

[Walter Joyce]

I find it stunning , really

I prefer this to your 'Clock Crew' work - yes the style is simplistic (and as you say quite possibly rushed) but it fits the nature of the story, in my view. The dark overtones mix with the cartoon style very well.

I'd love to see more work along these lines, I take it that the short story is your own creation? I like the concept behind it, and applaud your imagination!

Masquatto responds:

Yeah, none of my CC work is really up to par with my own standards either.
Thanks.

Yes, I wrote it during the weekend I made it. When my schedule clears up, I'm thinking about making a prequel to the story. Thank you. :]